So I went ahead and changed up the flow of words to make it fit more... correctly.

And now I'm stuck with writer's block. I'm at a fork in the road and I can't make up my mind on which path to follow; this is a crucial step into the plot of the fanfiction and yes, I admit, I never actually had a plan. I figure if I saw the ending, everything would work out, but no. It doesn't work this way. Moving the plot too quickly would ruin the pace I was going at, but in this case I might as well seeing as the story isn't about the game, more about after the ending but needs certain parts during so no one's confused so much.... ehhh, what am I getting at?

Path One: Both persons go into a village and are immediatly kicked out because of an incident involving one of them. This path is faster and will allow character interaction and a faster pace into the pre story line. In the long run, kind of slow.

Path Two: One stays outside feeling that something is odd; goes to a familiar yet vague place and has many unsafe visions. Slower but more character and history is finally on concrete and the plot is ready to go. In the long run, slightly faster.

:(

Your Existing Situation
Seeks a close and understanding bond in an atmosphere of shared intimacy, as a protection against anxiety and conflict.

Your Stress Sources
Has an unsatisfied need to ally herself with others whose standards are as high as her own, and to stand out from the herd. This desire for preeminence isolates her and inhibits her readiness to give herself freely. While she wants to surrender and let herself go, she regards this as a weakness which must be resisted. This self-restraint, she feels, will lift her above the rank and file and ensure recognition as a unique and distinctive personality.

Your Restrained Characteristics
Circumstances are restrictive and hampering, forcing her to forgo all joys and pleasures for the time being.

Clings to her belief that her hopes and ideas are realistic, but needs encouragement and reassurance. Applies very exacting standards to her choice of a partner and wants guarantees against loss or disappointment.

Your Desired Objective
Wants to make a favorable impression and be recognized. Needs to feel appreciated and admired. Sensitive and easily hurt if no notice is taken of her or if she is not given adequate acknowledgment.

Your Actual Problem
Needs to be valued and respected as an exceptional individual, in order to increase her self-esteem and her feeling of personal worth. Resists mediocrity and sets herself high standards.

EDIT: I posteed it anyways. :P

If anyone ever asks, I was never here. Muahahaha

Title: Scorned
Author: ice_chalis
Pairing: Arthur and...
Rating: T
Summary: N/A (Seriously, even I don't know where I'm going with this).
( Those darn apples... )

 

¬¬ MEEP.